Chapter 2: The Name on the Pickup List

Ava’s whisper stayed with me as I looked past her toward the open door. Inside, I heard a drawer slide shut, then Derek’s footsteps moving away from us—as if the house were still his to arrange and I was only a visitor waiting to be told what came next.
“Your sister is picking them up?” I called.
Derek appeared in the doorway. “That’s what I said.”
“Did you speak to her?”
A beat too long. “I texted.”
“That isn’t the same thing.”
His mouth tightened. Behind him, Sloane paused in the hall, one pearl earring catching the light. She looked at Ava and Noah with a smile that seemed practiced for children.
“Avie,” she said gently. “Nono. You must be so tired.”
Ava shrank against my side. Noah buried his face in my coat.
I felt the names land before I understood why. The kids had their own nicknames for each other, but Sloane had no business using them like they belonged to her.
“How do you know what we call them?” I asked.
Sloane’s smile faltered. “Derek told me.”
“About their nicknames?”
Derek stepped between us, not quite blocking her, not quite shielding me. “Can we not do this in front of them?”
“You brought them into it when you packed their bags.”
“They need a calm night. My sister can take them.”
“If you haven’t reached her, you don’t know that.”
“I’ll call her.”
He raised his phone and tapped the screen. His face changed as he listened to the ringing, though his voice stayed light.
“Come on, Beth.”
No answer. He ended the call, then immediately tried again.
“Her phone’s probably on silent,” he said.
Ava looked at his screen. “Is Aunt Beth coming?”
Derek lowered the phone. “I’m trying to find out.”
The words came out softer than his earlier certainty. Ava’s fingers tightened around mine.
Noah’s fox had slipped from his grasp and lay on the porch beside the suitcase. I picked it up and handed it back. He held it by one worn ear, eyes fixed on the doorway.
“Where are we sleeping?” Ava asked.
“With me,” I said. “We’ll figure out the rest together.”
Derek exhaled sharply. “You’re making this harder than it has to be.”
“No. I’m asking who is taking our children before I agree to anything.”
Sloane took a step forward. “Hannah, I wasn’t trying to upset them.”
“Then don’t call them by names they haven’t given you.”
Her cheeks colored. She touched one of the pearls, then dropped her hand when she saw me watching. For a second, her face looked less smug than caught—though I couldn’t tell whether she was ashamed of the earrings, the nicknames, or simply being seen.
Ava tugged my sleeve. “Mom. That’s the car.”
She pointed toward the curb.
A dark blue Volvo sat near the mailbox, engine off. I hadn’t noticed it before. Sloane followed Ava’s gaze and went still.
“The blue one,” Ava whispered. “She was at school.”
Derek turned to her. “When?”
“On Friday. I came out and she was by the pickup sign.” Ava pressed closer to me. “She said you were busy, Dad.”
I looked at Sloane. “You picked her up?”
“I didn’t take her anywhere,” she said quickly. “I was there with Derek.”
“That wasn’t my question.”
Derek’s jaw worked. “It was one afternoon. I had a meeting.”
“You said your sister was helping with pickup.”
“I said Beth could help.”
Ava’s face crumpled, not into tears but into the effort of holding them back. I crouched beside her.
“You don’t have to explain anything,” I said. “You didn’t do anything wrong.”
She nodded, still watching Sloane.
The front door creaked behind us in the breeze. A suitcase tipped against the porch rail, and Noah startled so hard his fox fell again. I caught it before it hit the steps.
“Let’s get what you need,” I told them.
Derek put his arm across the doorway. “You’re not going through the house and taking whatever you want.”
“I’m taking their medication, their school bags, and clothes for tonight.”
“The bags are already out here.”
“Then I’ll get the things that aren’t.”
For a moment he held his ground. Then his eyes flicked to the children, and he stepped aside with an irritated shrug.
“Fine. Five minutes.”
I didn’t answer. I took Ava’s hand and led the way inside.
The hall smelled of lemon cleaner and the cinnamon candle I’d lit that morning. On the console sat the framed school picture from September: Ava missing one front tooth, Noah squinting into the sun, both of them leaning against me. The space beside it was empty. Derek’s usual bowl for his keys had been moved, and the drawer beneath it stood half-open.
I kept walking.
Their backpacks were by the kitchen table, but Noah’s inhaler and Ava’s allergy medicine were upstairs in the bathroom cabinet. I found the medicine first, then packed it into the small blue pouch I kept for field trips. My hands shook once when I reached for the zipper. I made them steady before I went back down.
Derek stood in the kitchen with his phone in his hand. Sloane was nowhere in sight.
“You could have told me you were bringing her into their lives,” I said.
“I didn’t bring anyone into anything.”
“She knew their private nicknames. She was at school.”
“She was there for me.”
“So were the kids.”
His eyes hardened. “You want to turn one pickup into a trial?”
“No. I want to know why my daughter recognized your girlfriend’s car.”
For the first time, he looked toward the window instead of at me.
There it was: not an answer, but the outline of one.
I slung the backpacks over my shoulder and tucked the medicine pouch into my purse. The house looked exactly as it had that morning, which made the suitcases outside feel even crueler. A lunchbox was still open on the counter. Ava’s spelling list sat beneath a grocery receipt. Their ordinary life had been left in place while Derek staged its removal.
At the door, Sloane stood alone in the hall. The pearls rested against her throat.
“Derek said this would be easier,” she murmured.
“Easier for whom?”
She didn’t answer. I carried the bags out.
We were loading them into my car when Mrs. Alvarez from next door called from her porch.
“Hannah, are you all right?”
“I’m taking the kids to a friend’s for tonight.”
Her gaze moved to the luggage. “I thought you might want to know. My porch camera caught something earlier. Sloane came by with those suitcases before you got home.”
Derek appeared in the doorway behind us. “Mrs. Alvarez, this isn’t your business.”
“I’m not making it my business,” she said. “I’m telling Hannah what I saw.”
My neighbor held up her phone. She didn’t come closer or ask me to watch. She simply said, “The timestamp’s there if you need it.”
I looked at Derek. “You said this was sudden.”
“I said I’d made a decision.”
“You packed our children’s things before I even got home.”
“They’re my children too.”
“Yes,” I said. “Which is why you don’t get to turn their lives into a surprise.”
He took a step toward us, then stopped. Ava climbed into the back seat and buckled herself in. Noah followed, clutching his fox and the backpack I’d brought out. I shut the door and waited until both their seat belts were secure before getting behind the wheel.
Derek remained on the porch. Sloane stood just inside the doorway, one hand lifted toward the pearls.
I drove to Nina’s without turning around.
Nina opened her front door before I could knock twice. She took one look at the children and pulled them into her arms without asking for the story first. Ava clung to her, then let go and followed Noah inside. Nina brought them blankets and warm milk while I carried in their bags.
“Stay as long as you need,” she said quietly.
May you like
My phone buzzed in my hand.
The bank’s alert filled the screen: Was this transfer authorized? $18,400 to Whitmore Consulting from your joint account.